It's just another version of Quikwars, just like how Brickspace is just another version of Brikwars. Some people would rather use Brickspace instead of Brikwars, he wants to use this.
Anyway, some good ideas, but Quikwars is actually less complicated than this and probably shorter as well.
Lego Space RPG: Mix Brickquest and Brikwars. Done.