Betrayal- Part 1

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Betrayal- Part 1

Postby Kalvinator » Thu Feb 07, 2013 5:42 pm

(Quick moment of Meta-ness
Cap. Bellows- Green
Cap. Jess- Pink
Ensign- Red
Engineer- Blue
And Done)

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The Diplomatic Ship "Justice", escorted by the Chancellor Class Dreadnought "Destiny" speed towards the ESF capital world, still in hyperspace.

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After going into the new galaxy where the NCR is now, the "Justice" was striped of weapons and became a dip. ship for travel by ambassadors.

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On board the bridge of the Justice, Captain Bellows stares out the transpari-steel viewport as the stars zoom by.

"Engineer, how's the ship doing?"

"All Systems at 100% captain"

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"Captain, incoming message from the Destiny"

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A hologram of Captain Naomi Jess appears on the holo-viewer.

"Hello Captain Jess, ambassador Cain is fine. All our systems are at 100%

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"Good to hear Captain. I'm just checking in, and giving a heads up that we are approaching our destination, so we'll be out of hyperspace in just a few moments."

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"Yes Maim"

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"Sir, we are now out of hyperspace"

"Excellent... but where's...."

BOOM!

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"Engineer, what was that!"

"The stern just got hit! Starboard side!"

BOOM!

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"Engines are hit and are failing sir!"

"Ensign! Who's attacking us?!"

"Sir, its the..."

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"INCOMING!!"

BOOM!!!

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...

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End Part 1
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby Quantumsurfer » Thu Feb 07, 2013 5:47 pm

Hologram is smart. Also, Star Trek Shaky Bridge...well done.
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby Silverdream » Thu Feb 07, 2013 6:17 pm

Good so far, the hologram was clever also.
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby Bragallot » Thu Feb 07, 2013 6:33 pm

Your captain fig looks pretty awesome. I'm jealous of those hair pieces now. Good work on the pictures, too.
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby alphafalcon541 » Thu Feb 07, 2013 10:27 pm

:shock: Have my faction ESF just attacked a allied ship or is there something else going on like Bonn-o-Tron.
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby Kalvinator » Thu Feb 07, 2013 10:30 pm

You'll have to wait and see... :twisted:
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby alphafalcon541 » Thu Feb 07, 2013 10:33 pm

How long will I have to wait because I really need a good story
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby Kalvinator » Thu Feb 07, 2013 10:35 pm

Hmm, the earliest you can expect for part 2 would be Sunday evening.
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby alphafalcon541 » Thu Feb 07, 2013 11:46 pm

Cool thanks man, also you got my PM I hope.
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby Kalvinator » Fri Feb 08, 2013 10:43 pm

Yeah, I got it but put up the post before then. It will be said in the next post. Also, the leaders name is Alpha Falcon correct? Also, don't get too excited, you're only mentioned.
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby alphafalcon541 » Sat Feb 09, 2013 12:35 am

Thanks anyway. I'm just enjoying the story line. Also the leaders name is Alphafalcon.
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby Kalvinator » Sun Feb 10, 2013 2:14 pm

Two things:

6. Part 2 won't come out today, I have more homework then I expected, and I would have done it yesterday, but I had a Speech meet.

7. I did take all the pics for the microspace parts though.


Edit- It is looking like it may be a snow day tomorrow, so if there is, Part 2 will come out.

Edit 2- Nevermind about the snow day, freaking school never closes. Anyways, I have next week off, so my goal for that week is to finish Betrayal, and start and possibly finish Kalvinator: Origins. May have to get new batteries for camera though.
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby Kalvinator » Tue Feb 12, 2013 12:01 am

Bragallot wrote:I'm jealous of those hair pieces now.


Those and the some of the torso pieces are the only good thing about figs that come out in the clone wars sets.
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby R-Man476 » Sun Feb 17, 2013 7:32 pm

The halogram was very clever, and i think that was a bad way to end part 1. Everyone dying i me come on! :fist:
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Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Postby Kalvinator » Mon Feb 18, 2013 2:20 pm

So yeah, bad news. I was almost done, I only had like, 6 pics left to take... and my cameras batteries died. Its gonna be a day or two more until I can get more AAA's.
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