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Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 5:42 pm
by Kalvinator
(Quick moment of Meta-ness
Cap. Bellows- Green
Cap. Jess- Pink
Ensign- Red
Engineer- Blue
And Done)

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The Diplomatic Ship "Justice", escorted by the Chancellor Class Dreadnought "Destiny" speed towards the ESF capital world, still in hyperspace.

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After going into the new galaxy where the NCR is now, the "Justice" was striped of weapons and became a dip. ship for travel by ambassadors.

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On board the bridge of the Justice, Captain Bellows stares out the transpari-steel viewport as the stars zoom by.

"Engineer, how's the ship doing?"

"All Systems at 100% captain"

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"Captain, incoming message from the Destiny"

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A hologram of Captain Naomi Jess appears on the holo-viewer.

"Hello Captain Jess, ambassador Cain is fine. All our systems are at 100%

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"Good to hear Captain. I'm just checking in, and giving a heads up that we are approaching our destination, so we'll be out of hyperspace in just a few moments."

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"Yes Maim"

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"Sir, we are now out of hyperspace"

"Excellent... but where's...."

BOOM!

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"Engineer, what was that!"

"The stern just got hit! Starboard side!"

BOOM!

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"Engines are hit and are failing sir!"

"Ensign! Who's attacking us?!"

"Sir, its the..."

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"INCOMING!!"

BOOM!!!

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End Part 1

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 5:47 pm
by Quantumsurfer
Hologram is smart. Also, Star Trek Shaky Bridge...well done.

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 6:17 pm
by Silverdream
Good so far, the hologram was clever also.

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 6:33 pm
by Bragallot
Your captain fig looks pretty awesome. I'm jealous of those hair pieces now. Good work on the pictures, too.

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 10:27 pm
by alphafalcon541
:shock: Have my faction ESF just attacked a allied ship or is there something else going on.

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 10:30 pm
by Kalvinator
You'll have to wait and see... :twisted:

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 10:33 pm
by alphafalcon541
How long will I have to wait because I really need a good story

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 10:35 pm
by Kalvinator
Hmm, the earliest you can expect for part 2 would be Sunday evening.

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2013 11:46 pm
by alphafalcon541
Cool thanks man, also you got my PM I hope.

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 10:43 pm
by Kalvinator
Yeah, I got it but put up the post before then. It will be said in the next post. Also, the leaders name is Alpha Falcon correct? Also, don't get too excited, you're only mentioned.

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2013 12:35 am
by alphafalcon541
Thanks anyway. I'm just enjoying the story line. Also the leaders name is Alphafalcon.

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2013 2:14 pm
by Kalvinator
Two things:

6. Part 2 won't come out today, I have more homework then I expected, and I would have done it yesterday, but I had a Speech meet.

7. I did take all the pics for the microspace parts though.


Edit- It is looking like it may be a snow day tomorrow, so if there is, Part 2 will come out.

Edit 2- Nevermind about the snow day, freaking school never closes. Anyways, I have next week off, so my goal for that week is to finish Betrayal, and start and possibly finish Kalvinator: Origins. May have to get new batteries for camera though.

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2013 12:01 am
by Kalvinator
Bragallot wrote:I'm jealous of those hair pieces now.
Those and the some of the torso pieces are the only good thing about figs that come out in the clone wars sets.

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2013 7:32 pm
by R-Man476
The halogram was very clever, and i think that was a bad way to end part 1. Everyone dying i me come on! :fist:

Re: Betrayal- Part 1

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 2:20 pm
by Kalvinator
So yeah, bad news. I was almost done, I only had like, 6 pics left to take... and my cameras batteries died. Its gonna be a day or two more until I can get more AAA's.