[MS] Over the Rainbow
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[MS] Over the Rainbow
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Delightful. I expect I'll be putting rainbow transparent in the wiki soon.
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Very nice. Trattoria is supposed to be like the Daleks of the brikwars universe right, no emotion all that.... I actually just got an idea...
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More like hyper-repressed rather than emotionless, I think.
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Hatred is an emotion.Kalvinator wrote:Very nice. Trattoria is supposed to be like the Daleks of the brikwars universe right, no emotion all that.... I actually just got an idea...
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I find this amusing.
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DO EET!Quantumsurfer wrote:Delightful. I expect I'll be putting rainbow transparent in the wiki soon.
I rather enjoyed that little tale.
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Just putting it out there for anyone potentially confused, but this is done.
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Minifigs: 3.5/5. Nothing really jumped out at me, but Scratch looked good. How *does* he fit his head inside a Death Mask?
Photography: 5/5 I saw everything I needed to see, and a couple things I can't unsee. But I won't take points off for those.
Writing: 4/5. Very well executed dialogue, and just enough exposition to keep us in the loop. But I felt like it ended way too early. I have to take points off somewhere for not getting the whole story in on time, so I might as well do it here.
Title: 5/5. Rainbow references are always a plus when writing pwny stories.
Overall appeal: 4/5.
Total score: 21.5/25.
Photography: 5/5 I saw everything I needed to see, and a couple things I can't unsee. But I won't take points off for those.
Writing: 4/5. Very well executed dialogue, and just enough exposition to keep us in the loop. But I felt like it ended way too early. I have to take points off somewhere for not getting the whole story in on time, so I might as well do it here.
Title: 5/5. Rainbow references are always a plus when writing pwny stories.
Overall appeal: 4/5.
Total score: 21.5/25.
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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow
I personally have as a policy that my results are final so , but this is the entire story. There were no plans for more- I had to do this whole thing in like three hours.
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Hey! What is that guy in the back doing there?
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Looks like the nasty, to me...
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I dunno, it still kinda *felt* incomplete somehow. Still, what you have is good.Colette wrote:I personally have as a policy that my results are final so , but this is the entire story. There were no plans for more- I had to do this whole thing in like three hours.
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Quick question, what set did you get that guy in the blue suit?