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The Alighieri Incursion
Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:10 pm
by Arkbrik
The frozen world of Alighieri, on the outskirts of FELC space.
These soldiers have the thankless task of patrolling the icy plains for any signs of danger.
"Uh, guys..."
"...what's that?"
"It looks like a... crack?"
"???"
Vergilius Raskolnikov has returned from Hell to continue his quest!
Unwholesome demons follow in his wake.
"For FELC! For Alighieri!"
"This is patrol 9, we are under attack! Requesting ba-"
"-aargh..."
The tide cannot be stopped.
The FELC soldiers are defeated and the crack closes. The demons wander off into the wastes looking for something to kill.
"Ah, a Sub-Etha transmitter. How convenient."
"General, this is Vergilius Raskolnikov. Hell foolishly thought it could keep me contained, but I conquered my way out."
"Just as we expected, sir. What are your orders?"
"I am on some planet called Alighieri. It will do fine as my next conquest. Prepare the fleet and army for departure!"
"Yes sir!"
Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:36 pm
by RagnarokRose
I am honored. Thank you, Arkbrik.
Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 1:59 pm
by Warhead
AAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaah! SHARKHEAD DAEMON!!!
Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:36 pm
by Magic Soap
Good name, for a planet overrun by hellspawn.
Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 2:40 pm
by Silent-sigfig
My god.
Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 4:44 pm
by Hoboman
Nice base plate. Simple and yet effective. I also like the "tear" opening up. again, worked well.
Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 5:10 am
by Apollyon
I hope you have or will eventually read all those books you are pulling names from.
Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:18 pm
by BFenix
I suddenly thought that "crack" was something like this:
Brings up memories anyone?
Also, nice setting Arkbrik!
Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:53 pm
by OREMAWESOME1234
why was there a navi?
Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 5:20 pm
by RagnarokRose
Uh... because Pedonuker nuked their home planet and they received eternal damnation? Dunno.
Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 6:19 pm
by BFenix
Ross_Varn wrote:Uh... because Pedonuker nuked their home planet and they received eternal damnation? Dunno.
, but most likely, the giant tree wasnt enough for him
Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 8:43 am
by Arkbrik
OREMAWESOME1234 wrote:why was there a navi?
These demons were inspired by Dwarf Fortress; there was a shark demon, a tentacle demon, a goat demon, a monkey demon, a smurf demon...