Untitled Short Film, hereby entitled Chase Video

[Blitzen]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bEkr4rxh--M

I made this for class. It took about a month, from first draft to final edit. The actors are my brothers, which is why they're not very good. And I composed the music myself, which is why it's not very good. I sort of ran out of time and I might redo the music this winter break.

Criticize all you want; I don't care. If someone says something smart, I can actually re-edit.

The credits are our actual names, so I'd appreciate it if you didn't post my name on this forum.

[aoffan23]

That was actual pretty awesome. For a class assignment, that's actually really well done. Brava.

As for the music, the guitar (?) part that starts at 0:04 is my only issue. The rest of it actually sounds like serious 80's action music. I say don't change it at all.

Also, your long-haired brother is cool. He turns invisible and shoots lasers out of his fingers.

[Tzan]

a video

Better than I was expecting.

He saw the guy heading into the stairway from like 40 feet away. But during the chase they were 8 feet apart

[RagnarokRose]

That's... pretty friking cool. Nothing like a parking garage in the dead of night for random film scenes, eh?

[Blitzen]

It was about 7pm to 9pm, but yes.