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MNGG's latest battle

Post by jophfy » Tue Jun 24, 2008 4:19 pm

Ok here is another battle from MNGG right now I am waiting for the pictures to load and I still have not named it. So here is the link to the report.

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Post by pesgores » Tue Jun 24, 2008 7:40 pm

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What happened?

Looks like you have to learn on how to make interesting battle reports. Try moronstudios' site.

I would rate this as good or as bad, but i can't because i don't know what just happened...
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Post by piltogg » Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:33 pm

yah, I'll go edit in some more intresting adjectives about the battle later (jophy doesn't have a very good attention span) so probaly tomarow sumtime it will be better
also that megablox game we did is almost ready to get put up.

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Post by Theblackdog » Wed Jun 25, 2008 5:37 am

The battle looks interesting enough. The only problem is that, since you don't describe anything about it, we have no clue what's going on. That hailfire droid was pure ownage, though.
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Post by picklesniffer » Wed Jun 25, 2008 10:02 am

I lost one
He lost two
I lost one
I lost another three
He lost two
I lost my last one
He won.
Destruction is bliss.

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Post by Blitzen » Wed Jun 25, 2008 10:04 am

piltogg wrote:yah, I'll go edit in some more intresting adjectives about the battle later (jophy doesn't have a very good attention span) so probaly tomarow sumtime it will be better
also that megablox game we did is almost ready to get put up.
You're going to write random words?
Often, literally, a pillow fight but may include similar situations like volleyball, particularly when wardrobe is skimpy and the action is bouncy.

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Post by pesgores » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:11 am

picklesniffer wrote:I lost one
He lost two
I lost one
I lost another three
He lost two
I lost my last one
He won.
That's nothing.
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Post by piltogg » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:20 am

Blitzen wrote:
piltogg wrote:yah, I'll go edit in some more intresting adjectives about the battle later (jophy doesn't have a very good attention span) so probaly tomarow sumtime it will be better
also that megablox game we did is almost ready to get put up.
You're going to write random words?
random adjectives that make it more intresting

like he lost two of his droids to fire from the bows of piltogg's crusaders.
That is at least A LITTLE BETTER

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Post by pesgores » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:34 am

Agreed.
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Post by piltogg » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:50 am

K i finished slapping together a few sentences o its a bit better now and makes sense moar

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Post by Blitzen » Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:58 am

Do you know what an adjective is?
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Post by Bonn-o-Tron » Wed Jun 25, 2008 12:22 pm

Blitzen wrote:Do you know what an adjective is?
Apparently not. And maybe it's just me, but sometimes it's hard to tell which sentence is describing which picture.
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Post by Blitzen » Wed Jun 25, 2008 1:12 pm

I was responding to this:
piltogg wrote:random adjectives that make it more intresting

like he lost two of his droids to fire from the bows of piltogg's crusaders.
That is at least A LITTLE BETTER
I don't know which interesting adjectives he was talking about.
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Post by Bonn-o-Tron » Wed Jun 25, 2008 1:28 pm

I was saying that piltogg apparently doesn't know what an adjective is.
piltogg wrote:like he lost two of his droids to fire from the bows of piltogg's crusaders.
There's maybe one adjective in there.
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Post by pesgores » Wed Jun 25, 2008 1:46 pm

Better now, but i can't still figure out most of the action...Like the movements.
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