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I live to dream

Post by Silverdream » Tue Oct 09, 2012 3:57 pm

I live To Dream.
The wakening moment is spent yearning,
for the blissful embrace of night.

Even as the day churns slowly through
and i slog step after step hopelessly reconstructing the swiftly shattering gleams of ever-after
shoving together mismatched shards
throwing up support after support and in attempt to ward of the quakes of consciousness
reverberating from the first crack of wordily recognition till the final whisper before the fall.

Into the sublime subconscious and a thousand new worlds each more real then my own.
but as if in taunt this all slips away in but a flash,
shoving me back into the froth and mist of the world out side
step by step i slog through anger, stress and injury
all for but a glimpse into the only light i know in the engulfing abyss of mortality
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Re: I live to dream

Post by Keldoclock » Tue Oct 09, 2012 6:49 pm

Your poem is like
Something that a teenager
would scribble lol
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Re: I live to dream

Post by Silent-sigfig » Tue Oct 09, 2012 9:07 pm

Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
Your poetry sucks.
Go banhammer yourself.
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Re: I live to dream

Post by Silverdream » Tue Oct 09, 2012 10:29 pm

Gaze upon my marble complexion
And fall in love with my still perfection
I am a maid of stone shaped by hands
Skilled hands
All over my body.
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Re: I live to dream

Post by Zupponn » Wed Oct 10, 2012 1:33 am

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Re: I live to dream

Post by RunsWithLegos » Wed Oct 10, 2012 11:23 pm

I akm pretty sure that is my poem...

edit: yep, word for word mine

http://bobdd0.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d34fz1t

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Re: I live to dream

Post by Silverdream » Wed Oct 10, 2012 11:35 pm

RunsWithLegos wrote:I akm pretty sure that is my poem...

edit: yep, word for word mine

http://bobdd0.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d34fz1t
Yep, found it on the fifth page of artwork.
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Re: I live to dream

Post by RunsWithLegos » Wed Oct 10, 2012 11:41 pm

indeed, and yeah i was a bit of a whiney bitch when i wrote that.

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Re: I live to dream

Post by Silverdream » Wed Oct 10, 2012 11:58 pm

RunsWithLegos wrote:indeed, and yeah i was a bit of a teenager when i wrote that.
Fix'd for truth.
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Re: I live to dream

Post by Arkbrik » Thu Oct 11, 2012 3:01 pm

Silverdream wrote:I live To Dream.
The wakening moment is spent yearning,
for the blissful embrace of night.

Even as the day churns slowly through
and i slog step after step hopelessly reconstructing the swiftly shattering gleams of ever-after
shoving together mismatched shards
throwing up support after support and in attempt to ward of the quakes of consciousness
reverberating from the first crack of wordily recognition till the final whisper before the fall.

Into the sublime subconscious and a thousand new worlds each more real then my own.
but as if in taunt this all slips away in but a flash,
shoving me back into the froth and mist of the world out side
step by step i slog through anger, stress and injury
all for but a glimpse into the only light i know in the engulfing abyss of mortality
The opening paragraph gets you excited but then it's just a lot of boring talk about how reality sucks. Needs more dreams.
Silverdream wrote:Gaze upon my marble complexion
And fall in love with my still perfection
I am a maid of stone shaped by hands
Skilled hands
All over my body.
This is pretty hot. Who wrote it?

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Re: I live to dream

Post by Silverdream » Thu Oct 11, 2012 3:04 pm

I actually did write the second one in about ten seconds flat.
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Re: I live to dream

Post by RunsWithLegos » Thu Oct 11, 2012 3:04 pm

hmmm

you have a point arkbrik, i may rewrite it soon.

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Re: I live to dream

Post by Keldoclock » Mon Oct 15, 2012 6:52 am

Arkbrik wrote:
Silverdream wrote:Gaze upon my marble complexion
And fall in love with my still perfection
I am a maid of stone shaped by hands
Skilled hands
All over my body.
This is pretty hot. Who wrote it?
Prime opportunity for a new rank title here.
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Re: I live to dream

Post by Predator » Mon Oct 22, 2012 9:31 am

Silverdream wrote:I actually did write the second one in about ten seconds flat.
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Silverdream wrote:Gaze upon my cyan complexion
And fall in love with my flying perfection
I am a pegasus of awesomeness shaped by sonic rainbooms
Sonic Rainbooms
All over my sky.

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Re: I live to dream

Post by GeneralOfDeath » Mon Oct 22, 2012 12:24 pm

If he made it 20% cooler, I might bother to read it.
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