I live to dream
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I live to dream
I live To Dream.
The wakening moment is spent yearning,
for the blissful embrace of night.
Even as the day churns slowly through
and i slog step after step hopelessly reconstructing the swiftly shattering gleams of ever-after
shoving together mismatched shards
throwing up support after support and in attempt to ward of the quakes of consciousness
reverberating from the first crack of wordily recognition till the final whisper before the fall.
Into the sublime subconscious and a thousand new worlds each more real then my own.
but as if in taunt this all slips away in but a flash,
shoving me back into the froth and mist of the world out side
step by step i slog through anger, stress and injury
all for but a glimpse into the only light i know in the engulfing abyss of mortality
The wakening moment is spent yearning,
for the blissful embrace of night.
Even as the day churns slowly through
and i slog step after step hopelessly reconstructing the swiftly shattering gleams of ever-after
shoving together mismatched shards
throwing up support after support and in attempt to ward of the quakes of consciousness
reverberating from the first crack of wordily recognition till the final whisper before the fall.
Into the sublime subconscious and a thousand new worlds each more real then my own.
but as if in taunt this all slips away in but a flash,
shoving me back into the froth and mist of the world out side
step by step i slog through anger, stress and injury
all for but a glimpse into the only light i know in the engulfing abyss of mortality
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- Keldoclock
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Re: I live to dream
Your poem is like
Something that a teenager
would scribble lol
Something that a teenager
would scribble lol
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Re: I live to dream
Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
Your poetry sucks.
Go banhammer yourself.
Violets are blue.
Your poetry sucks.
Go banhammer yourself.
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Re: I live to dream
Gaze upon my marble complexion
And fall in love with my still perfection
I am a maid of stone shaped by hands
Skilled hands
All over my body.
And fall in love with my still perfection
I am a maid of stone shaped by hands
Skilled hands
All over my body.
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- RunsWithLegos
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Re: I live to dream
I akm pretty sure that is my poem...
edit: yep, word for word mine
http://bobdd0.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d34fz1t
edit: yep, word for word mine
http://bobdd0.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d34fz1t
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Re: I live to dream
Yep, found it on the fifth page of artwork.RunsWithLegos wrote:I akm pretty sure that is my poem...
edit: yep, word for word mine
http://bobdd0.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d34fz1t
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- RunsWithLegos
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Re: I live to dream
indeed, and yeah i was a bit of a whiney bitch when i wrote that.
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Re: I live to dream
Fix'd for truth.RunsWithLegos wrote:indeed, and yeah i was a bit of a teenager when i wrote that.
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Re: I live to dream
The opening paragraph gets you excited but then it's just a lot of boring talk about how reality sucks. Needs more dreams.Silverdream wrote:I live To Dream.
The wakening moment is spent yearning,
for the blissful embrace of night.
Even as the day churns slowly through
and i slog step after step hopelessly reconstructing the swiftly shattering gleams of ever-after
shoving together mismatched shards
throwing up support after support and in attempt to ward of the quakes of consciousness
reverberating from the first crack of wordily recognition till the final whisper before the fall.
Into the sublime subconscious and a thousand new worlds each more real then my own.
but as if in taunt this all slips away in but a flash,
shoving me back into the froth and mist of the world out side
step by step i slog through anger, stress and injury
all for but a glimpse into the only light i know in the engulfing abyss of mortality
This is pretty hot. Who wrote it?Silverdream wrote:Gaze upon my marble complexion
And fall in love with my still perfection
I am a maid of stone shaped by hands
Skilled hands
All over my body.
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Re: I live to dream
I actually did write the second one in about ten seconds flat.
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- RunsWithLegos
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Re: I live to dream
hmmm
you have a point arkbrik, i may rewrite it soon.
you have a point arkbrik, i may rewrite it soon.
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Re: I live to dream
Prime opportunity for a new rank title here.Arkbrik wrote:This is pretty hot. Who wrote it?Silverdream wrote:Gaze upon my marble complexion
And fall in love with my still perfection
I am a maid of stone shaped by hands
Skilled hands
All over my body.
stubby wrote:omg noob, balrogs are maiars too, don't you know anything
Re: I live to dream
Silverdream wrote:I actually did write the second one in about ten seconds flat.
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Re: I live to dream
If he made it 20% cooler, I might bother to read it.
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