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ninja_bait wrote: ↑

Tue Jan 14, 2020 2:32 pm

Hey Quantum, I missed that style is rated out of 20. Can you just double my scores in that category so I don't have to edit all those posts

I was wondering if you had forgotten or if you just thought all the entries were really crappy.

My judging is complete. If someone (Quantum?) can serve as a secondary judge for my entry, I think we can wrap this up.

Concept and Theme: 7 - A good expansion to your canon. Form: 8 - Like ninja_bait said, the one scene works well on its own. Voice: 7 - Pretty good. Style: 16 - Not bad, but could use a little more fleshing out. Presentation: 6 - A little blocky, and while I don't mind the bold text, the asterisks in...

Concept and Theme: 10 - I love it. I'm not usually one for the more meta-styled BrikWars stuff, but this is great. Form: 9 - Could've been a tiny bit longer, but part of what makes it work is how direct and to-the-point it is. Voice: 8 - Short but sweet. Style: 19 - Almost perfect. Presentation: 9 -...

Concept and Theme: 9 - A great expansion of BrikVerse lore and a nice addition to the Bookwyrm Saga. Form: 7 - A little disjointed, I imagine the full version does much better with this. Voice: 7 - It's part of a much larger saga, so there's not much in the way of backstory for the characters. Not r...

Concept and Theme: 10 - Is it similar to your entry from last year? Yes. Is it an interesting expansion of the lore and does it provide an interesting contrast with the ending? Also yes. Form: 9 - I really don't have any major complaints. Voice: 10 - Compelling characters, gripping tension. Style: 1...

Concept and Theme: 8 - Interesting concepts aplenty. Form: 6 - A good outline, but a little short for my taste, I think the paragraphs could use moar fleshing out. Voice: 7 - Moar character development plz. Style: 15 - No shortage of cool ides, but the execution could be longer and more developed. P...

That truck is amazing.

I saw this today and I thought you guys might appreciate it:

Shit, we still don't have a secondary judge.

The gunships roared overhead, the thunder of their engines pounding in the Warking's eardrums despite his heavy helmet. The sound of their bombing was like a thousand hurricanes roaring bloody murder, and the flashes of light that exploded into the night sky lit up the world as bright as high noon. ...

As Brag said, the dark blue and red make for a very striking color scheme.