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by Gorvoslov
Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:16 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: BrikFiction Festival 2020
Replies: 16
Views: 607

Re: BrikFiction Festival 2020

My judging is complete.
by Gorvoslov
Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:16 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF20] Dios Resurgent
Replies: 2
Views: 117

Re: Dios Resurgent

Fyi, you forgot to actually include the [BF20] tag, but it's tagged in the top thread and I've already written this up so here goes! Dios Resurgent Concept and Theme: 10 - Hard to go wrong with what is effectively a "liberation day" story. Form: 9 - All moves forward nicely. Voice: 9 - Pretty simple...
by Gorvoslov
Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:15 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF20] Akhilleus and the Prince of Vasluxia
Replies: 4
Views: 175

Re: [BF20] Akhilleus and the Prince of Vasluxia

Akhilleus and the Prince of Vasluxia Concept and Theme: 10 - Death of the crown prince is a pretty significant development worth telling. Form: 10 - It definitely kept moving. Voice: 7 - I liked the two opposite views, but it was a little confusing at first until I figured out that's what was going ...
by Gorvoslov
Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:14 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF20] Hell Raiser
Replies: 4
Views: 161

Re: [BF20] Hell Raiser

Hell Raiser Concept and Theme: 6 - I'm docking on "Why it deserves to be told". Resurrection of a major character? Great. I'm just not a fan of space nazis existing, even if it's only to be slaughtered mercilessly. Form: 8 - Overall well formed. Voice: 9 - It's pretty Style: 18 - Overall pretty good...
by Gorvoslov
Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:14 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF20] - Investigation of Object FI-219184
Replies: 3
Views: 130

Re: [BF20] - Investigation of Object FI-219184

Investigation of Object FI-219184 Concept and Theme: 9 - Very meta. Form: 10 - Keeps moving, I'm a huge sucker for "Something lurking in the dark of space picking us off one by one". Voice: 9 - Not much to complain about here. Style: 19 - Great cerebral engagement. Just goes to show you don't need t...
by Gorvoslov
Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:13 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF20]A Terma Story: Face to Face
Replies: 7
Views: 148

Re: [BF20]A Terma Story: Face to Face

A Terma Story: Face to Face Concept and Theme: 9 - Quite the assassination. Form: 7 - Probably could have been a little shorter for what was in here. Voice: 7 - Main part I found awkward was early on there's a lot of stuff in brackets that breaks up the active thought. Style: 16 - The main problem f...
by Gorvoslov
Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:12 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF20] The Underworld
Replies: 2
Views: 133

Re: [BF20] The Underworld

The Underworld Concept and Theme: 9 - Solid intro of a new "world" for chaos opportunities. Form: 9 - Covers a decent amount of small interactions, decent pace. Voice: 6 - The jumps were a bit awkwardly handled. Style: 17 - Felt a little inconsistent, but overall decent for the cerebral engagement. ...
by Gorvoslov
Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:12 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF20] [Anno] From A Place Of Love
Replies: 3
Views: 209

Re: [BF20] [Anno] From A Place Of Love

I don't know whether I want to award bonus points or dock points for that opening line, it's just fantastic. So instead, I will ignore it completely so I don't have to think anymore. From A Place of Love Concept and Theme: 10 - Satirizing fandom is always a win in my books so easy points. Form: 8 - ...
by Gorvoslov
Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:10 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF20] The Evergreen Depths
Replies: 3
Views: 260

Re: [BF20] The Evergreen Depths

The Evergreen Depths Concept and Theme: 9 - Hooray for major alliances. Form: 9 - Things flow pretty well. Voice: 10 - Very clear. Style: 18 - Definitely good cerebral engagement. Dealing with lovely snowbanks that get taller than me, can confirm, Winter is definitely worse at the start and then you...
by Gorvoslov
Tue Dec 29, 2020 11:20 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF20] - So much for sleep...
Replies: 3
Views: 133

[BF20] - So much for sleep...

Boris fell into bed, exhausted. He had finally officially been accepted as a Bard within the tribe, which naturally required partying way later than was reasonable. From the very first time he heard The Metal, it had taken hold of him, spoken to his very being. He had known from that day that he nee...
by Gorvoslov
Mon Dec 28, 2020 10:09 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: BrikFiction Festival 2020
Replies: 16
Views: 607

Re: BrikFiction Festival 2020

Bragallot wrote:
Mon Dec 28, 2020 2:12 pm
I've read them all but I also entered the contest myself so I think that kinda rules me out.
I mean, I'm planning to enter tomorrow as well. Though I'm pretty good at remaining unbiased other than for the things I gravitate more towards anyways. That's what the point of the alternate judge is.
by Gorvoslov
Mon Dec 14, 2020 7:38 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: BrikFiction Festival 2020
Replies: 16
Views: 607

Re: BrikFiction Festival 2020

Apparently my post volunteering as tribute for judging was devoured by vicious internet gremlins.

I can judge, hoping to myself enter near the deadline.
by Gorvoslov
Fri Nov 20, 2020 7:51 pm
Forum: Reports From the Field
Topic: The 11th Annual Halloween Hellhunt
Replies: 18
Views: 1570

Re: The 11th Annual Halloween Hellhunt

Zupponn wrote:
Tue Nov 17, 2020 7:35 pm
Gorvoslov wrote:
Tue Nov 17, 2020 6:36 pm
If you're fine with me taking a few days to do it, I can cover it. I'll try not to be super biased in favour of the one I was in :P
Go for it. Just make a post here when you are done.
And done.
by Gorvoslov
Fri Nov 20, 2020 7:51 pm
Forum: Reports From the Field
Topic: Brik or Treat Battle Royale [HH Winner 2020]
Replies: 17
Views: 1373

Re: [HH]2020 - Brik or Treat Battle Royale

Brik or Treat Battle Royale Gameplay - 5. Good contest, good killing. Everything felt properly unpredictable. Photography - 4 The dark shots actually work reasonably well here. Usually I'd be concerned about not really knowing what is going on but here it's both clear and adds nicely to the overall ...
by Gorvoslov
Fri Nov 20, 2020 7:50 pm
Forum: Forum Battles
Topic: [HH] Among Us (COMPLETE)
Replies: 22
Views: 1409

Re: [HH] Among Us (COMPLETE)

Among Us Gameplay - 4. It was a pretty good adaptation of the game with enough changes to remind some people it was Brikwars instead. Photography - 3.5 Would have been nice to get full ship overviews at the end of each round in the final report. Violence - 3. A bit lacking, could have done horrible ...
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