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- Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:16 pm
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: BrikFiction Festival 2020
- Replies: 16
- Views: 607
Re: BrikFiction Festival 2020
My judging is complete.
- Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:16 pm
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: [BF20] Dios Resurgent
- Replies: 2
- Views: 117
Re: Dios Resurgent
Fyi, you forgot to actually include the [BF20] tag, but it's tagged in the top thread and I've already written this up so here goes! Dios Resurgent Concept and Theme: 10 - Hard to go wrong with what is effectively a "liberation day" story. Form: 9 - All moves forward nicely. Voice: 9 - Pretty simple...
- Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:15 pm
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: [BF20] Akhilleus and the Prince of Vasluxia
- Replies: 4
- Views: 175
Re: [BF20] Akhilleus and the Prince of Vasluxia
Akhilleus and the Prince of Vasluxia Concept and Theme: 10 - Death of the crown prince is a pretty significant development worth telling. Form: 10 - It definitely kept moving. Voice: 7 - I liked the two opposite views, but it was a little confusing at first until I figured out that's what was going ...
- Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:14 pm
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: [BF20] Hell Raiser
- Replies: 4
- Views: 161
Re: [BF20] Hell Raiser
Hell Raiser Concept and Theme: 6 - I'm docking on "Why it deserves to be told". Resurrection of a major character? Great. I'm just not a fan of space nazis existing, even if it's only to be slaughtered mercilessly. Form: 8 - Overall well formed. Voice: 9 - It's pretty Style: 18 - Overall pretty good...
- Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:14 pm
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: [BF20] - Investigation of Object FI-219184
- Replies: 3
- Views: 130
Re: [BF20] - Investigation of Object FI-219184
Investigation of Object FI-219184 Concept and Theme: 9 - Very meta. Form: 10 - Keeps moving, I'm a huge sucker for "Something lurking in the dark of space picking us off one by one". Voice: 9 - Not much to complain about here. Style: 19 - Great cerebral engagement. Just goes to show you don't need t...
- Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:13 pm
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: [BF20]A Terma Story: Face to Face
- Replies: 7
- Views: 148
Re: [BF20]A Terma Story: Face to Face
A Terma Story: Face to Face Concept and Theme: 9 - Quite the assassination. Form: 7 - Probably could have been a little shorter for what was in here. Voice: 7 - Main part I found awkward was early on there's a lot of stuff in brackets that breaks up the active thought. Style: 16 - The main problem f...
- Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:12 pm
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: [BF20] The Underworld
- Replies: 2
- Views: 133
Re: [BF20] The Underworld
The Underworld Concept and Theme: 9 - Solid intro of a new "world" for chaos opportunities. Form: 9 - Covers a decent amount of small interactions, decent pace. Voice: 6 - The jumps were a bit awkwardly handled. Style: 17 - Felt a little inconsistent, but overall decent for the cerebral engagement. ...
- Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:12 pm
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: [BF20] [Anno] From A Place Of Love
- Replies: 3
- Views: 209
Re: [BF20] [Anno] From A Place Of Love
I don't know whether I want to award bonus points or dock points for that opening line, it's just fantastic. So instead, I will ignore it completely so I don't have to think anymore. From A Place of Love Concept and Theme: 10 - Satirizing fandom is always a win in my books so easy points. Form: 8 - ...
- Sat Jan 09, 2021 5:10 pm
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: [BF20] The Evergreen Depths
- Replies: 3
- Views: 260
Re: [BF20] The Evergreen Depths
The Evergreen Depths Concept and Theme: 9 - Hooray for major alliances. Form: 9 - Things flow pretty well. Voice: 10 - Very clear. Style: 18 - Definitely good cerebral engagement. Dealing with lovely snowbanks that get taller than me, can confirm, Winter is definitely worse at the start and then you...
- Tue Dec 29, 2020 11:20 am
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: [BF20] - So much for sleep...
- Replies: 3
- Views: 133
[BF20] - So much for sleep...
Boris fell into bed, exhausted. He had finally officially been accepted as a Bard within the tribe, which naturally required partying way later than was reasonable. From the very first time he heard The Metal, it had taken hold of him, spoken to his very being. He had known from that day that he nee...
- Mon Dec 28, 2020 10:09 pm
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: BrikFiction Festival 2020
- Replies: 16
- Views: 607
Re: BrikFiction Festival 2020
I mean, I'm planning to enter tomorrow as well. Though I'm pretty good at remaining unbiased other than for the things I gravitate more towards anyways. That's what the point of the alternate judge is.
- Mon Dec 14, 2020 7:38 pm
- Forum: BrikFic
- Topic: BrikFiction Festival 2020
- Replies: 16
- Views: 607
Re: BrikFiction Festival 2020
Apparently my post volunteering as tribute for judging was devoured by vicious internet gremlins.
I can judge, hoping to myself enter near the deadline.
I can judge, hoping to myself enter near the deadline.
- Fri Nov 20, 2020 7:51 pm
- Forum: Reports From the Field
- Topic: The 11th Annual Halloween Hellhunt
- Replies: 18
- Views: 1570
- Fri Nov 20, 2020 7:51 pm
- Forum: Reports From the Field
- Topic: Brik or Treat Battle Royale [HH Winner 2020]
- Replies: 17
- Views: 1373
Re: [HH]2020 - Brik or Treat Battle Royale
Brik or Treat Battle Royale Gameplay - 5. Good contest, good killing. Everything felt properly unpredictable. Photography - 4 The dark shots actually work reasonably well here. Usually I'd be concerned about not really knowing what is going on but here it's both clear and adds nicely to the overall ...
- Fri Nov 20, 2020 7:50 pm
- Forum: Forum Battles
- Topic: [HH] Among Us (COMPLETE)
- Replies: 22
- Views: 1409
Re: [HH] Among Us (COMPLETE)
Among Us Gameplay - 4. It was a pretty good adaptation of the game with enough changes to remind some people it was Brikwars instead. Photography - 3.5 Would have been nice to get full ship overviews at the end of each round in the final report. Violence - 3. A bit lacking, could have done horrible ...