[HH] Among Us (COMPLETE)

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Re: [HH] Among Us

Post by Theblackdog » Tue Oct 27, 2020 1:18 pm

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Orange smashes his OTC into the table and leaves it there, then runs out of the room firing his gun into the ceiling.

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Everyone goes back to work.
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Orange goes to the Bridge.
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And drives the ship wildly through the asteroid field.
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Some people lose their footing...
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Dark Green heads to the right engine room to align the engine.

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He is interrupted.

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Scared that Blue is following him, Yellow bolts and runs into Cyan.
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Oops.
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Orange sabotages the lights.
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In the darkness, Blue is haunted by a ghost.
"You killed zee greatest detective. Now who will solve your murder? Wooooo, spooky
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Zee true killer was inside you all along! Zat’s right, it was your skeleton!"

"Piss off, ghost!"
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Just as Orange cuts the lights, Red walks in on him.
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Because the lights are out, Red is only able to see the body. 1000 IQ PLAY

On turn 18, Red reports Dark Green's dead body and the crew once again gathers to vote on the killer.
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"Aight so as I was walking past electrical and blue was heading the other way and I found the body in right engine which is very close to electrical
I’m 90% sure it was blue since he was heading the other way and just as I got into right engine the lights were sabotaged
I’m voting blue"

"I went into electrical to do my task
Then I headed towards left engine to drop off fuel"

"BLUE REPORTED LAST ONE DIDN'T HE? ALSO! I AM THE BEST PILOTE! AND SECOOOOOOND AMEEEEENDMENT! WAIT! WHERE'S YELLOW??? WHAT HAPPENED TO THE NAKED ONE! QUICK! RED! TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES! WE CAN'T HAVE NO NAKED ONE! AND CAN I GET MORE OF THIS SNIFFY STUFF? IS ANYONE ELSE HEARING GHOSTS TALK TO THEM?
ALSO! DID WE GET THE LIGHTS FIXED? WE SHOULD PROBABLY DO THAT I SAY! WE NEED LIGHTS!
I HAVE THE BEST IDEASX"

"Yellow is also dead I believe, or blackdog neglected to add him to the meeting"
"OH THAT WHACKY NUDIST! SHOWING UP LATE FOR MEETINGS! DESERVES TO BE NAKED FOR BEING LATE I SAY!
...UNLESS YELLOW ACTUALLY IS DEAD, THEN IN THAT CASE, I AM SAD, THEY WERE TO BEAUTIFUL TO DIE. OR AM I SUPPOSED TO LIKE MY NUDISTS ALIVE? I'M HAVING A BIT OF TROUBLE KEEPING WHAT KIND OF CRAZY STRAIGHT"

"I saw yellow going towards admin a while back
Is there a way for us to access the security cameras?
Or are those lights"

"YOU CAN WATCH THEM FROM THE ROOM WITH THE BEST WEAPONS! SECURITY! OR YOU CAN TAKE BEST CHOPPY FROM TABLE, I LEFT IT AS A GIFT!"
"I was in cams some"
"I know I'm dead, but I'll just confirm yellow is dead too now, not just missing"
GHOST! A GH-GH-GH-GHOST!
THESE DRUGS HAVE SOME REALLY CRAZY SIDE EFFECTS
I MEAN
I AM SANE! AND NOT ON DRUGS

"Uh, i don't think it's a hallucination
unless I'm on the same stuff as you
thanks dark green
I saw blue walk past me when i was in security, and he didn't kill me"

No, I am on drugs, not you
"I'm talking to Orange"
"I'm talking to Orange"
"But maybe kill was on cooldown if that exists"
"I feel I've talked too much. Adios!"
"AH, I SAW BLUE WHEN I WAS DEFENDING EVERYONE'S SECOND AMENDMENT RIGHTS! BUT I HAD MY GUN! THE BEST GUN!
THEN I NEEDED TO RELOAD."

"I believe the ceiling has been shot sufficiently Orange"
"YES! NOW WE MUST SHOOT THE FLOOR! OR MAYBE NOTHING! I SWEAR I CAN BE CALM!"
"how bout the walls
i just need a cool gun now"


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Re: [HH] Among Us

Post by Theblackdog » Mon Nov 02, 2020 10:39 am

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The crew heads to fix the lights.

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White splits off from the group and is haunted.
"I found a clue. It doesn't matter now. But soon, once we have to solve your murder, it will."
"This ghost is kinda sus."

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Orange takes a detour past security to get a replacement OTC.

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As the lights come back up, he attacks Pink and misses.

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Pink and Blue shoot back, and Orange takes a wound.

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Cyan kills Pink while Blue and Orange continue to miss each other at point blank range.

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Orange finally finishes off Blue with his special attack.

With only one Crewmate remaining, Orange calls an emergency meeting.
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"Wait... Orange was an Impostor?"
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"Always has been."
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Re: [HH] Among Us (COMPLETE)

Post by Gorvoslov » Mon Nov 02, 2020 9:42 pm

This was a really interesting battle. Turn based definitely gave me lots of time to overthink every decision :P

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Re: [HH] Among Us (COMPLETE)

Post by Yarpen_Ared » Tue Nov 03, 2020 6:37 am

This is awesome, love the ending!

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Re: [HH] Among Us (COMPLETE)

Post by sahasrahla » Wed Nov 04, 2020 4:08 pm

fantastic, i love it

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Re: [HH] Among Us (COMPLETE)

Post by Scribonius » Sat Nov 07, 2020 6:10 pm

Judgement time... Wait, what? Oh, JUDGING time. Well, that's different, innit?

Gameplay: 5 Laid out well, pretty easy to follow, and doing most of the player discussions that was was a stroke of genius.

Photos: 4 Technically digital pics, but mostly very clear. The big blackout areas looked a little odd though and sometimes blacked out parts they maybe did not need to...

Violence: 4 Could have been more, but not bad.

Writing: 3 I'm sorry, but this is basically the plot from a video game. On top of that, while I like the use of colors to denote who is saying what, it made it VERY hard to read some of the player commentary without fiddling with background settings and such.

Appeal: 4 Overall, the use of DSMs like this was a great idea, and while it is basically a video game plot this feels like classic Brikwars action. The only reason I didn't rate this a 5 was because at no point did you mention the Blue Moon, which was the whole theme of the Hellhunt.

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Re: [HH] Among Us (COMPLETE)

Post by ninja_bait » Fri Nov 13, 2020 2:37 pm

EMERGENCY JUDGING

Gameplay 5 - high effort put into the concept, fog of war implementation
Photography 4 - framing is good overall but lacks interesting lighting
Violence 4 - not enough violence shared for all players
Writing 4 - fun player chats
Overall Appeal 4.5 - hits the zeitgeist, does not mention the moon
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Re: [HH] Among Us (COMPLETE)

Post by Gorvoslov » Fri Nov 20, 2020 7:50 pm

Among Us

Gameplay - 4. It was a pretty good adaptation of the game with enough changes to remind some people it was Brikwars instead.
Photography - 3.5 Would have been nice to get full ship overviews at the end of each round in the final report.
Violence - 3. A bit lacking, could have done horrible things during ejection to make it feel a little more "Brikwars Among Us".
Writing - 3.5. Hard to rate writing on this since most of it was whatever chaos we threw at you. Colour coding was nice but some of them are definitely hard to read.
Overall Appeal - 3.5. It's a fun concept, but you didn't convince me to shoehorn in the moon during one of my drugged out rants so I have to dock you points for that.

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