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[JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Posted: Fri Jul 19, 2019 5:11 pm
by Brikthulhu
https://starfelix.smugmug.com/My-First-Gallery heres my entry :D

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Two turrets exchange fire
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A warrior climbs to the deck
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The battle on deck continues
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the Ones from Beyond arrive
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Overwatch

Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2019 11:19 am
by stubby
These images could use some captions to explain what's going on. I like the multicolor camouflage against the multicolor floor, smart.

Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2019 11:47 am
by Diamondsword901
That SHIP reminds me of mine, it’s really cool

Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2019 7:35 pm
by Brikthulhu
thanks for the advice. I didnt do the camo on
Purpose but im glad you like it.

Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2019 7:49 pm
by Brikthulhu
There. added captions and accidentaly deleted a photo

Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Posted: Fri Aug 02, 2019 9:57 pm
by Kastrenzo
Style - 3
Substance - 3
Photography 4

The actual scenes and subject matter are fun but it's not explained at all what's going on or who any of these minifigs are. the substance of the build and background is too chaotic, I feel the substance and dim and out of focus photography kind of hurt each other

Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Posted: Sat Aug 03, 2019 8:30 am
by MadMario
Style - 6 - good use of the parts you have, that`s the brikwars spirit

Substance - 5 - missing some details, and maybe a recognizable colour scheme would help to differ factions better

Photography - 4 - often too dark and a bit out of focus - it`s hard to follow whats going on here


Theme - 5 - maybe not referring actual events or characters(but that´s hard if you just started here, right?),
but very brikwarsy at all

Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Posted: Sat Aug 17, 2019 1:24 pm
by aoffan23
Style: 6
While it may not be stylish in the traditional sense, it definitely feels like Brikwars. Also the Mindstorms monster is pretty frightening.

Substance: 4
It's hard to fault someone for not having the briks to make cohesive stuff, but it is very rainbow. I do like that tank with the airplane cockpit.

Photography: 3
The lighting is pretty wonky, which I can't tell if it's an issue of using flash or just the room this is taken in. It would also probably be worth working on the framing of your shots, so that you avoid having extra blank space (unless it's intentional).

Theme: 3