The Magic SOB forum is for posts of story sequences that are frequently vignette-based. Put those here while actual battle reports can go in Reports From the Field.
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by Quantumsurfer » Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:20 pm
Delightful. I expect I'll be putting rainbow transparent in the wiki soon.
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by Kalvinator » Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:33 am
Very nice. Trattoria is supposed to be like the Daleks of the brikwars universe right, no emotion all that.... I actually just got an idea...
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by stubby » Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:46 am
More like hyper-repressed rather than emotionless, I think.
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by Silverdream » Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:46 am
Kalvinator wrote:Very nice. Trattoria is supposed to be like the Daleks of the brikwars universe right, no emotion all that.... I actually just got an idea...
Hatred is an emotion.

lol j/k
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by Zupponn » Mon Feb 18, 2013 1:46 am
I find this amusing.
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by pkbrennan » Mon Feb 18, 2013 10:50 pm
Quantumsurfer wrote:Delightful. I expect I'll be putting rainbow transparent in the wiki soon.
DO EET!
I rather enjoyed that little tale.

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by cleanupcrew » Thu Feb 21, 2013 9:02 pm
Just putting it out there for anyone potentially confused, but this is done.
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by Theblackdog » Fri Feb 22, 2013 1:49 am
Minifigs: 3.5/5. Nothing really jumped out at me, but Scratch looked good. How *does* he fit his head inside a Death Mask?
Photography: 5/5 I saw everything I needed to see, and a couple things I can't unsee. But I won't take points off for those.
Writing: 4/5. Very well executed dialogue, and just enough exposition to keep us in the loop. But I felt like it ended way too early. I have to take points off somewhere for not getting the whole story in on time, so I might as well do it here.
Title: 5/5. Rainbow references are always a plus when writing pwny stories.
Overall appeal: 4/5.
Total score: 21.5/25.
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by cleanupcrew » Fri Feb 22, 2013 7:30 am
I personally have as a policy that my results are final so

, but this is the entire story. There were no plans for more- I had to do this whole thing in like three hours.
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by Bragallot » Fri Feb 22, 2013 8:55 am
Hey! What is that guy in the back doing there?
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by pkbrennan » Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:25 am
Looks like the nasty, to me...
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by Theblackdog » Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:46 am
Colette wrote:I personally have as a policy that my results are final so

, but this is the entire story. There were no plans for more- I had to do this whole thing in like three hours.
I dunno, it still kinda *felt* incomplete somehow. Still, what you have is good.
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by Kalvinator » Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:42 pm
Quick question, what set did you get that guy in the blue suit?