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Forum Battle Prelude. Betrayals price

Post by Killer Karetsu » Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:14 pm

NOTE there is something wrong with my computer, so question marks are marked as >

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"I'm getting a bit fed up with you, Karetsu. No bloodshed, killing or anything fun."
"Hah! To your pleasure I can say that I'm fed up with you too. But I will bear you as my burden, and you will not make a hell out of someone else's life like you did to mine."

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"You are not the Karetsu I used to know, who was powerful, had superior talents compared to anyone else and a promise for a even greater future...then you became the coward you are now."

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"It would have been cowardice to let you rule over my body, to let you make my decisions and gaining power I shouldn't earn. It is better now when I rebuild what has been lost, and maybe some day I'll be forgived. But not even on that day I'll let you loose!"

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"Very well....but mark my words; I WILL get free once more and then I will crush you with my new host!"

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"And the we will make it to the point where you failed me, and continue beyond that! Are you really sure that you will risk this kind of a change, to gain power over a whole galaxy>"

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"BEGONE, FIEND!"

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*SHINK*

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"Sigh. Lately, He has been pestering me more than usually....something is going to happen.."

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At the blastdoor of Karetsus training room..
"What do you want, brother officer>"
"I have important matters to speak with lord Karetsu. Please, let me in."
"Allright."

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*THUD*

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*KLANG*

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"Good day, my lord."
"That is not neccesary, thank you."

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"So, what do you have to say>"
"We have finally found out the meeting place of the smuggling gangs. We have also found out the traitor amongst us, who has aided the smugglers.."
"Hm. Who is it>"

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"General Machus."

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*krunch* "That son of a..."

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"Excuse me. So, you said we know the meeting place>"
"Indeed, sir. It is just near Juluz, a small village. There is a ruined factory, which the smugglers have chosen as their residence. I recommend and airstrike, and we will get rid of them all at once."

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"No. Civilian casualties would be too high. We will use the aid of the planets militia, and make use of the element of surprise. I will personally be there, and you should make your team ready too."
"As you wish, my lord."

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"Hmm....that General Machus sounds like a good person...I should see if he is worthy."

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"He wont live enough for you to find out."
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Post by Crazywolf » Mon Oct 03, 2011 2:54 pm

Cool! I can't wait. :)

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Post by RagnarokRose » Mon Oct 03, 2011 5:30 pm

That last picture is the win. This sounds so cool.
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Post by Theblackdog » Tue Oct 04, 2011 9:32 am

Agreed. This sounds awesome.
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Post by Brikboyz » Tue Oct 04, 2011 8:45 pm

Epic storyline! The battle should be equal in epic.
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