My second fanfic

Post by **501stCadians** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:42 am

Arkbrik,i think you may be Brikwar's first troll.

Post by **Magic Soap** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 2:07 pm

Gee, that was some scary shit.

Post by **Almighty Benny** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:03 pm

Warhead wrote:What like they become a couple and buy a house together and go live in the country but Abbadon can't commit due to his sense of betrayal and the commute into the city is killing Lucius so the hole shit and shebang is going to hell in a basket and so then they adopt a Latino teenager in order to bring them back together but the Latino isn't who he said he was, he's actually Eduardo the infamous drugs baron who turned states evidence on the other barons and so has been given another identity and the other barons find out and attack and the whole thing stops on a razors edge cliff hanger in time for the second series.

You mean like that?

yes, exactly like that

well done

Post by **Warhead** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 1:47 am

Almighty Benny wrote:
Warhead wrote:What like they become a couple and buy a house together and go live in the country but Abbadon can't commit due to his sense of betrayal and the commute into the city is killing Lucius so the hole shit and shebang is going to hell in a basket and so then they adopt a Latino teenager in order to bring them back together but the Latino isn't who he said he was, he's actually Eduardo the infamous drugs baron who turned states evidence on the other barons and so has been given another identity and the other barons find out and attack and the whole thing stops on a razors edge cliff hanger in time for the second series.

You mean like that?
yes, exactly like that

well done

You watch to much "Days of our Lives" mate.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0h8TtFK0 ... re=channel

Post by **Arkbrik** » Tue Feb 02, 2010 1:48 pm

Yay, I got a review!

Hakkayo wrote:dude come on this is just slander to warhammer 40k
im not going to rave and rant its just that this is kind of a disgrace to a really good saga

but if you were going for the slander and perversion of Warhammer 40k then i say well done you are very good in the way of pissing off fans